[Various spoilers ahead]

[Also it's re-e-ally long wall of text]

I'll start with the most important thing to report – there's a bug, that happens if you go to save menu while character speaks and then return to game. After you do that, voice noise goes on infinitely, until you proceed to next line. (android version)

Now to not-so-important matters – i was bored, so i figured i'd try to make some proofreading to train my English (still learning it). So, take what is written below with a grain of salt. Also, some of that stuff may be written like that intentionally and i'm really sorry if i report it as grammar.

1. "It is like a field researcher, but we mostly deliver anything that we think is/notice as unusual to the Guild and see what they will do."

2. "Am I that tired already?"

3. "Umm… sorry for the inconvenience." 

4. I'm not sure what is that supposed to mean, but judging by previous lines it should go like "If I wouldn't fall into water, I would be dead right now…" 

5. I think situation calls for another word: "I cannot really condemn my savior." Word "rescuer" just looks weird to me, maybe because i've never seen it, it was always "lifeguard" or "savior" depending on circumstances. 

6. "He gave (whom? me/us) a final node and then he left the room." 

7. "Gargwa eggs, rice, vegetables and what looks like/seems to be berry jam and bread."

8. "Fascinating…" 

9. "That is where we grow the (you can replace "the" with our/these) berries." 

10. "Sorry, mate. Can't help it." or "Sorry mate, can't help it."

11. "Can't help it, but I'm also kinda wonderin'." 

12. "There were doubts that i am (you can also add word one/human here)?!" Also please, pay attention to order when you type "?!". "?" always goes first! I actually might've missed some mistakes like these. 

13. "The… supplies?" 

14. "I looked over Jin's body and it's pretty much the same as Leo's." 

15. "No, it's okay." or "No. It's okay."

16. "Maybe I should've accepted his offer..." or "Maybe I should've taken him up on his offer..."

17. "I am not really the lightest person, so I can't help but think how strong he and Leo must be." 

18."Aren't brothers supposed to get along?" 

19. "...Why does it look like that is how pyramids were built..." Also, i haven't played, but are there any pyramids in MH world? 

20. "Ah, I remember the Elder said someone is visiting." Probably missed a lot of things like that, too. Likely because there's usually a slight pause after those, substituting commas. But not in this case. 

21. "These boys are gonna be the end of/for me."

22. "We are just normal wyverians, basically. But our growth and appearance are based on the monster we are resemblin'."

23. "Some actually do have abilities." 

24. "Yeah, I think it is only a handful though." 

25. "Thank you so much for that!"

26. "How was the village, nya?!"

27. "When i furst came here, i wanted to turn tail and run!" 

28. "When my old hideout was attacked by meownsters, we didn't nyaw what to do." I really hope i got it right. 

29. "So we could escape…" I'm not actually sure if it's a mistake or not, but i wrote it down anyway.

30. "We always heard about this kind of stories and events when we were training, but I didn't expect it to be so…" 

31. "I gave the small cat a rub on the head and proceeded to get dressed." 

32. "He is always so busy, meowster sometimes wishes he wouldn't push himself too much." 

33. "Fruits, vegetables and even the Wish Berries are being grown here." 

34. …Honestly, i don't even know what to do about it, but I'm pretty sure air will never have a taste. 

35. "You look very pale." Please, do not forget about dots, if character wasn't interrupted by the next line. And even if he was interrupted, end interrupted lines with "–" or similar… character. 

36. "Who is that supposed to be?" 

37. "And even if he does, I am still blaming him." Considering previous line ("Make sure that he breaks nothing."), this should be correct. Or at least not as wrong.

38. "One day, the Felynes got this large hourglass they gave the Elder and i was pretty much ummm…" (when i saw that i imagined the Elder holding Time Piece from AHiT, but that's irrelevant)

39. "And seeing how a village is being made is so fascinating…"

40. "The Felyne handed me a small blue book which feels like it has been used several times."

41. "I believe you call it a ("catalog" for usa English and "catalogue" for british English)."

42. "It would be better if you would meet with the merchants to learn more about our village." If you don't like repeating "would", make one of them a contraction. 

43. Well, this one is kinda questionable, but i came up with "This way, you can understand how we are able to survive and help yourself with your investigation." Sorry if I misunderstood.

44. "I mean after what happened yesterday, I wouldn't be surprised if I would feel a bit sore."

45."So who are you supposed to be?"

46. "The food i made tastes like shit to you?" Remember, food either "tastes like" or "does taste like".

47. "It tastes really good, but I think there is a problem with the packaging." Because "but" has to oppose things against each other.

48. "It still tastes really good, even if by itself!"

49. "It tastes pretty good!"

50. "You're damn right it tastes good!"

51. "I want to know more about how your village does trading."

52. "And you're not intruding, so please come in!" I believe it's appropriate to add this word here, or it starts looking weird.

53. "I can't even see the table beneath all that stuff." Because no things were moved between first seeing this table and this line. Visibility couldn't change.

54. "I just woke up and this mess was already here."

55. "I wonder if we will be allowed to swim there."

Thanks for reading, I hope it was enlightening.

So, you asked to report bugs and errors to devlogs, right? Not exactly that, but please fix it. (…why you would have this…)

Just played it thanks to the android addition and it's GOOD! Something I must praise right away is the presentation of the menus and interface , it's not something many vns often put effort on ,which is understandable, but since you went through the trouble to make it look so nice it deserves recognition! the characters all look really appealing and honestly the idea of a MH monsters dating sim in itself is great as well 😩 ,I'm happy this exists ,will be looking forward to the next updates :)

Yess! I was waiting for that android release for weeks! I'll be reading it as soon as I get some free time 😁