[Various spoilers ahead]

[Also it is even longer wall of text than the last one]

Ahem. Yes. More proofreading. I've found these in 0.02, but I believe 0.02.1 haven't fixed any. Because of all the branching, I probably missed a lot of misspelling, but it'd be quite tedious task to check every branch, so maybe you should check branching content separately in order to find these evasive typos. Also I'd like to remind about grain of salt and understanding that some of reported things may be written like that intentionally.

1. "My first quest ever since I got accepted as a Guild Scriviner!"

2. "Now… that doesn't sound bad on its own." Since "its" in this case is a posessive word rather than a contraction, it doesn't need an apostrophe.

3. "My name is Scriviner."

4. "I am a Scriviner licensed by the Guild." You do write "Scriviner" with the first capital letter, right?

5. "It is rare for us to actually do the hunting ourselves, but…"

6. "Against a monster, huh…?"

7. "I put my notebook back in my bag."

8. "Yeah, there are some simple ones like Jaggis, Velocipreys and Ludroths, but compared to my other classmates, I barely passed the exam."

9. "A nameless village…? Is this…?"

10. "If the river wouldn't cushion my fall, I'd be dead right now…"

11. "You said this is a village with no name."

12. "Would it be alright to talk with them for a while?" Scriviner shouldn't know the Elder's gender in this line.

13. "We can live for 150 years at most and I am not sure how much time do I have before I depart myself."

14. "It was bound to happen, little one."

15. "The safety of our villagers comes first."

16. "I've got a bigger one, ohohoho!"

17. "I didn't have to worry about that/it back in the city cause our rooms have closed windows…"

18. "I am really grateful."

19. "It has a rough texture and is soft as a pillow."

20. "My leg was not really doing any help for me, so I just felt pain every step of the way."

21. "So that's why I scare those two for fun." Situation just like in №2, but the opposite.

22. "When i furst came here, my senses told me to turn tail and run!"

23. "One of the most agressive monsters in the/known to the world… is in front of me!"

24. It's not wrong, but I think it'd be better like "Well… what would you like to know about me?"

25. "I told you to be honest."

26. "Don't want to ruin these by leaving them laying out here in the sun."

27. "Considering I just met a Deviljho, it's amazing how fast I am getting desensitized to looking at them…"

28. "Speaking of which, I made this shirt myself!"

29. I do remember reporting it before, but it wasn't fixed :c. "Fascinating" would be correct.

30. "Weren't you looking at the bottle earlier?"

31. "I opened the box and it looks like fried fish with berries on top of brown rice."

32. "I placed an equal amount of each ingredient on the spoon and took a bite."

33. "I opened up my bag and noticed the book the Elder gave me."

34. "Well you were right earlier."

35. "I wonder if anyone would like to join…" Because pretty much nobody knows a thing about it yet and it's just future plans.

36. "Once I got out, I kept hearing this weird sound coming from one of the nearby buildings."

37. "I mean what were you expecting?"

38. Technically it's not wrong, but if it refers to deja vu or some events from the past, it should be like "Why do I have this feeling it did happen somewhere…"

39. "Ya seem to be enjoyin' it anyway and it'd be rude of me to let ya stop."

40. "Anyway, we still need to find these two things."

41. "Please don't…"

42. "It's… not really a bad sight."

43. "I wish he could do that closer…"

44. "What am I thinking?!"

45. "Uh oh…"

46. "Did I said something bad?"

47. "Remember our conversation the other day about how some of us grow differently based on the monsters we are?"

48. "A… curtain?"

49. "It would still give privacy without taking a lot of space."

50. "Or did you always love doing this?"

51. "Then… I felt a hot breeze."

52. "Oh fuck!"

53. "I think I just made a mistake by befriending someone with an attitude of a Tigrex…"

54. "Oh sure."

55. "Awww, is the human feeling too scared now?"

56. "These coins don't rust I think."

57. "I like sweet flavors."

58. "Can you at least elaborate rather than making me think?"

59. "It would (only?) be considered cheating if you use it where you're not supposed to…"

60. "Ummm ahh…"

61. "I turned around and saw the merchant Dodogama greeting me with a confused look."

62. "When I visited the construction site a few days ago, the houses looked like they're almost done, but I didn't see a lot of wood or sand piles."

63. "And we don't want to burden them with too much heavy work."

64. "H-his… clothes…?"

65. "That does make sense, but wouldn't it be easier if the currency circulated around the village?"

66. "I know he is supposed to be on his best behavior, but I can't really help but worry."

67. "I know I asked him to listen but apologizing?"

68. "Calm down?! CALM DOWN?! I welcome you into my home and you immediately break the only thing she left for me!"

69. "I should've already expected that."

70. "No reason, really. Just get to work!"

71. "Was that supposed to be a joke?"

72. "I know I am supposed to show you around, but…"

73. "He told me that their homes were invaded by a rampaging monster. When they were escaping, they happened to find your village."

74. "R-right."

75. "You're not!"

76. "T-thats not what I meant!"

77. "When we first met, I really meant it when I said you look cute while looking flustered like that!"

78. "…Carbalite."

79. "Your mouth drooling is all I need to know you wanna just eat it up! Or (maybe?) you didn't ate (your?) lunch which is uhhh… sorry?"

80. "I am feeling tired…"

81. "It's true, nya!"

82. "Koku led us to the chairs, so we sat down to talk."

83. "Koku, I know you really want to explore."

84. "He gave a bashful smile."

85. "Tomo and Mato always give me something whenever they return!"

86. "Did they encounter another person from the Guild? Oh my God…"

87. "I've always liked/preferred guys but…"

88. "So ummm…"

89. "However, this would require them to be recognized by the Hunter's Guild and they would have to prioritize the safety of humans, wyverians, and felynes alike."

90. "Decorations are said to give their holder more power or resistance depending on the type of material used to craft it."

91. "There have been several cases where Legends tend to be misconstruted due to fear or worry (maybe anxiety actually?)."

92. "Its howl is often heard in mountains or springs, signifying that the monster is on the hunt." Awoo~

93. "Even though he looks young and naive, his amazing talent and experience with being a merchant really shows."

In the end, I'd like to maybe give a word of advice? Try using DeepL for correction and inspiration. I'm writing some stuff myself, and when i feel like text kinda just feels wrong, i translate it into english and back in DeepL, which often gives me some ideas. Do not trust it blindly though, it's eating away whole sentences on rare occasions.

Also maybe playing some games specifically to improve your english? A-lot-to-read games like Persona 3-5 or games about unique personalities like A Hat in Time could do some good for you in that regard, trust me.