Just played through Leo's route and I have some feedback. Slight spoilers at the bottom of the list.

• A couple repeated grammar mistakes I've noticed throughout the script that I can put easily into words:
  • There are a number of times where present tense is used to talk about something that happened in the past. I can't recall a specific instance right now and forgot to write one down, though.
  • Every so often I come across someone being referred to as "the <Name>". Like "the Gerald," "the Leo," etc.
  • Some sentences ending with a question mark or exclamation point still have a period afterwards anyway, mostly in the courtroom scenes.
• The choices you get towards the end of Day 9 in a Jin or Leo route I feel could be phrased better. For example, "Insist on helping <love interest>" and "Send them both home." I interpreted the second option as it is right now as trying to convince the brother you're not dating to go home because it's late, not sending them both on their way.
• I feel like the turnabout suspense theme is a bit too quiet and can easily get drowned out by the speech blips.
• I expected to see the new sprites for characters appear after seeing them or when the gallery was updated, like the various crying sprites.
• I also expected that talking to Koku in the storehouse on I think day 21 of Leo's route would add his coatless sprites to the gallery and a journal entry that talks about his past relationship with Leo. I haven't done a Koku playthrough yet so his gallery only has the bare minimum stuff you get just from reaching day 4 even after that scene.

As an aside, Largo is an A+ wingman in all scenarios. Love the guy and his interactions with Jack inject the perfect amount of levity for such a turbulent part of the story.

Uhh is it just me or the gallery button just disappear from the log book

Where does the Chapter 3 Skip option appear?

I just find this game and suddenly an update? What the fuck is it, Christmas?

...oh wait, it's Valentine's Day. (...was that planned?)

Got lucky I guess and my saves I had for Jin, Runan, and Joseph all loaded and played without issue. And god damn did this chapter cup-check me in the feels each time. Bravo.

Only immediate feedback I have, for one: during the game, Joseph's face in the 4th CG scene gets blocked by the art of who's currently speaking. Not sure what can be done about that, though.

The second thing I have to say is something that I don't really think is actionable, nor am I certain if it were my call that I'd want to change it? But it feels like after Chapter 2 there isn't a lot of influence that the player has on how the story evolves or can change even in subtle ways. On the other hand, I often suffer from a bit of decision paralysis because I'm bisexual, so I was content to watch the story unfold without much interaction, especially with some of the heavy subject matter this chapter handled. Also, I'm very aware that adding more story branches or even small things that variables could tweak puts more of a workload on you, and you seem focused on just trying to tell six stories. Which is a lot of stories.

Idk, it just bugs me from a design standpoint to see gameplay systems get left behind. Just wanted to ramble I guess. Great work on this update though, can't wait for the rest!

I'm having an issue updating on Android. Says package conflicts with existing package.